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PostSubject: Tekkiri Yuki   Sat Apr 02, 2011 3:29 am


Character Information

Name: Tekkiri Yuki "Sessho Yuki Saiken"
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Place of Birth: Kirigakure no Sato
Date of Birth: October 31st
Appearance:
No one knows what he really looks like since everytime he makes a public appearance he wears the Mizukage uniform and a mask to cover his face. But he really looks like this.

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Height: 5'11
Weight: 135lbs
Personality: Tekkiri is an extremely intellegent indivisual who is also very secretive. He also has a child's curiousity on most things that he comes across. Everything he does is planned out and generally for his own self benefit or entertainment. He is an amazing strategist and possess phenomenal deduction and insight abilities. Tekkiri also gets bored very easily and because of this, he does things without reason and just to deal with that boredom. He is a sadist and even possibly a masochist making any aspect of pain entertaining to him. Tekkiri is also known as an extremely cold and ruthless person almost unable to show emotions. It is believed that Tekkiri himself is unable to show emotions because he doesn't know what they are really. He is unable to show fear or remorse and doesn't particularly seem to love anything other than himself.

Likes:
[*] Sweets
[*] Torture
[*] Being the Best
[*] Mind Games
[*] Manipluation

Dislikes:
[*] People who get in the way
[*] Failure
[*] Time being watsed

History:

Birth Arc
Tekkiri was born as the first and only son between two members of the Yuki clan in Kirigakure. He was born a very weak and fragile baby, who was estimated to die just several months after his birth. Tekkiri's mother was also mentally ill, so with his weak son and mentally illed wife, Tekkiri's father decided it was best to leave the village and society and isolate themselves. Interestingly enough Tekkiri lived and became a wanderer with the rest of his family.

Academy Arc
It took a long time for Tekkiri to join the academy as he didnt return to Kiri until he was much older. Now 10 years old, he was a healthy boy as well as a gifted genius. His curiousity also aided him by being a motivation for him to study harder about everything around him. However even at this age Tekkiri seemed to be a dark child. He preferred to figure life out on his own and thought that his parents were holding him back. Due to the fact that his mother became much more ill caused them to stop travelling as much and this annoyed Tekkiri. One night he approached his mother in her sleep while his father was out and smothered her to death. She died fairly quickly and peacefully and Tekkiri just made it seem like a natural death and went back to his own bed. The next day when his father discovered his wifed death he was depressed, and thats when Tekkiri suggested that they move back to Kiri. With his wife dead and his son healthy and ready to begin training as a ninja, Tekkiri's father saw no problem with this and the two headed back to their home village. Tekkiri before entering the village again decided to dye his hair a dark shade of blue and cut it differently. He also wore grey contacts to mask over his crimson red eyes. His father never questioned why he did it, just thinking his son was going through a phase, however Tekkiri had his reasons. After moving back to Kiri it took about a year for everything to be setteled and smoothed over. Tekkiri joined the academy at age 11 under the name Sessho. Since he couldnt join previously, he spent his time training with his father, learning much of the basics as well as advanced moves as well as his clans abilities. It wasn't long before Tekkiri proved that he was past the academy level and became a genin 2 years later.

Genin Arc:
Now 13 and in the academy, a lot of people were curious about Tekkiri. He became rather popular quickly. The boy who came out of nowhere and basically became the top of his class. He was also distant from the other genin which peaked others curiousity as well. Within his squad he got his missions done and trained, however he hardly connected with his teammates. When he went home he merely focused on honing whatever skills he learned and perfecting his clan's techniques. He quickly became skills with elemental jutsu, using water and wind element techniques, and he also became great with genjutsu. His chakra control was considered extraoridinary for the normal genin and it wasnt long before he was signed up for the Chuunin exams. During the Chuunin exams, Tekkiri encountered an another genin and had a private fight with them, ending with that Genin's death. This is when Tekkiri started becoming fonder of killing rather than showing mercy. It was also around here that he became really interested with torture.

Chuunin Arc:
After passing the Chuunin exams, showing his intellegence as well as fighting prowess to the people of his village, Tekkiri's skills became well known in the village. He made his father proud and attracted a lot of attention to the Yuki clan. However at this time Tekkiri only became interested in his own abilities and not what the village saw of him. He started perfecting his genjutsu and began conducting experiements with it. This time period inwhich Tekkiri began conducting these experiements became known as a Myterious Era in Kiri. People started committing suicide and Kiri's mortality rates sky rocketed. The first suicide victim was Tekkiri's own father. Tekkiri had used genjutsu to influece most of these suicides and those who survived from the genjutsu were put into such states of despair that they took their own lives. Because of the suicides, the amount of ninja's in Kiri's military declined and Chuunins had to begin taking more advanced missions. Because of this Tekkiri was able to manipluate the situation to show he was more than Chuunin material and he was quickly promoted to Jounin, at the age of 16.

Jounin Arc
Once promoted to Jounin, Tekkiri decided that he wanted to become the next Mizukage, however he knew that this would be no easy feat. He began creating a plan for him to seize power, but first thing was first, he had to become stronger, much stronger. He was already well known, but now he had to become the best so when the time came he was the best candidate in line for the posistion. He honed his skills for two years, become much more skills in ninjutsu and genjutsu, and during that time picking up on kenjutsu as well as Fuuninjutsu. Now 18, Tekkiri decided it was also time to place his plan into motion. It wasnt hard to start a Coup, all Tekkiri had to do was begin and spread a simple rumor that the killings that occured before when everyone committed suicide was an act by the kage for some malicious plot. It was always suspicious that such a large number of people died of suicide so suddenly and since it was the "Blood Mist" Village, people began to assume that this was just another method of weeding out the weak..which is just the conclusion Tekkiri expected the people to have. It took another year for the Coup to gain enough people to form a reasonable fighting force. During this time Tekkiri became the Mizukage's personal bodyguard. Tekkiri was hand picked for the job and once he got it he knew he had already won. Being hand picked for the Mizukage's bodyguard showed the others he was probably one of the most talented Jounin in Kiri. And with him leading the coup, he basically had good standings on both sides. All that needed to be decided now was when to strike and how should the Mizukage die. He had to make it look like he defending the Mizukage to the best of his abilities but was tag teamed and taken down. Tekkiri finally decided how everything should happen. On September 9th at precisely 1pm when the Mizukage was eatting lunch in his private estate with only Tekkiri watching over him, he suddenly collapsed. The food has been poisoned by Tekkiri himself disposed of leaving no evidence behind. Tekkiri then pulled out a kunai and attacked the Mizukage's already deceased corpse making it seem like he was assulted. Tekkiri then attacked himself, causing some severe injury but nothing fatal. He then attached an explosive tag to a kunai and set it off in the room, knocking him out as well as sending a signal for the coup to attack. When the Kiri shinobi arrived in the Mizukage's room it looked like the Mizukage was dead and Tekkiri gravely injured by unknown assaliants. Tekkiri was immediately taken care of and the coup members fought against Kiri shinobi in a small civil war. Once Tekkiri reawoke several hours later, he told the story and was promoted to Mizukage.

Kage Arc:
As Mizukage the first thing Tekkiri did was order an immediate funeral ceremony for the Mizukage. He said the reason behind this was he felt ashamed he wasnt able to guard him well enough and that the final thing he should do is make sure he is put to rest respectfully. No one doubted Tekkiri's reasoning and the body was immediately cremated as Tekkiri ordered. However this had nothing to do with Tekkiri's feeling...he just did this so there was no way any autospy reports could say anything about the poisoning of the Kage. Once that was out of the way and dealt with Tekkiri quickly killed everyone involved with the Coup. He weeded everyone out and had them executed on the spot without trail. Kiri was in terrible condition, but it wasnt long before Tekkiri began fixing all the problems with the village. 2 years later the military grew strong again and the village was rebuilt. Tekkiri now serves as the Mizukage, still using the name Sessho Yuki that he had in the academy as well as his dyed hair and contacts. Because of this no one knows his real name nor what he really looks like. He currently hasnt appeared public in several months however the village isnt worried because he is considered to the the greatest Mizukage of all time and fixes any issues, weather he is present or not.

Ninja ID

Village: Kirigakure no Sato
Rank: Mizukage
Element: Water (Blood), Wind (Ice)
Nindo: Life, this existance is nothing more than a game. The people you meet pieces to play with and the places you've been just stages to carry out whatever needs to be done.
Skills: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Kenjutsu, Fuuninjutsu
Equipment:

~Kunai x25
~Shuriken x35
~Wire 5 meters
~Explosion Tags x35
~Explosion Pouches x5
~Smoke/Flash Bombs x3
~Food/Soilder Pills x3
~Katana Blade x1

Fighting Styles: Tekkiri's fighting style strongly mirrors his personality, focusing much on sadism and torture to wear his opponents down before he eventually finishes this off. Because of this he likes to fight with genjutsu, however he is also extremely gifted with ninjutsu as well as kenjutsu and fuuninjutsu.

Jutsu: Listed Below

Clan Information
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Clan: Yuki (Saiken)
Kekkei Genkai: Ice Release
Description: The Yuki clan from Mist Village was known for its ability to manipulate water into forms of ice. Tekkiri who is a prodegy of the clan, modified the ice release to fit his sadistic method of fighting. By doing this he used his mastery and manipluation of the water element to create a blood sub-element. Most water related techniques Tekkiri use are red and have blood characteristics (taste, etc), however it isnt actually blood just manipluated water. Because he created and is the only one currently able to use this style of fighting, he changed his last name to Saiken, creating a new clan, even though he is truely a Yuki. His Saiken clan is a combination of his sadistic fighting style and torture, using blood instead of water and works mostly in conjunction with his Yuki bloodline. Because of this he has adapted well as a Yuki as is able to stand freezing colds without feeling it or being harmed by it.
Clan weapon: N/A
Clan History: Because of constant wars and economic strife, the people of the Mist country blamed their troubles on the actions of the ninja, directing most of their hate towards those with advanced bloodlines. Haku's father murdered his mother and attempted to kill him, it is unknown whether any other members of bloodline sharing these same abilities as Haku are still alive.

Misc. Information

RP sample:

It was a long day and the sun was setting in the sky when Tekkiri returned home after a long day of training. He walked inside of his house, walked straight past his dad, not even saying hello and heading straight into his bedroom. Once inside his room he turned the lock and sat in the bed looking towards the door. Ten...Nine...Eight...Seven...Six...Five...Four...Three...Two...One, he counted in his head before there was a knocking on the his bedroom door. He looked coldly and ominously at the door before responding, "Yes", in a innocent voice. "Son we need to talk...lately you've been more distant than ever and honestly it isnt healthy..so come out here". After about 5 minutes there was no response. Tekkiri just remained still looking at the door. Now he'll get upset..., he thought and he was right. His father yelled his name...but not his cover name but his real name. Tekkiri smiled on the other side of the door, knowing this was going to occur. He then pretended to be upset and he started "crying", as he walked up and opened the door.

He looked at his father momentarily and his father returned the stare. It was strange to see his 15 year old son cry, the same child who had been so distant and didnt seem to care about much. "D-dad...do you ever think of mom", he said while crying. His dad's eyes then began to water and suddenly Tekkiri looked at him and repeated the word "mom", except this time his voice wasnt sad, it was cold...almost emotionless. Suddenly the room they were in became much colder and the walls around them faded to black. Tekkiri's genjutsu was beginning to take effect and they were brought back in time to the day of Tekkiri's mothers death.

It was a warm summer's night and there was nothing in sight besides the starlight sky, a campfire and two tents. The two were standing by the campfire and Tekkiri's father looked at his son and asked what was going on. Tekkiri however did not respond, he just stared at the tents. Tekiri's father had already left the tent he and his wife were in and suddenly a shadow emerged from one tent, walking with nothing but a pillow into the next tent. Tekkiri looked at his dad and then walked into the tent so he could see what happened inside. His father followed him inside the tent, curious as to what his son was showing him. Inside the tent, Tekkiri's father watched as his young son used his pillow to smother his mother, then he just took his pillow, fixed his mother so she looked like she died naturally and walked out and back into his own tent to fall asleep. Tekkiri's father was in shock and before he could do anything time fast forwarded to the next morning when he saw his death wife. Tekkiri's dad looked at his son and trembled as he asked what did he just witness..Tekkiri just turned to his father and smile as he responded that this was what really happened.

Tekkiri's father was enraged and charged at his son, punching him square in the face. However Tekkiri just turned his head back looking at his father and laughing, his red eyes showing themselves now. As he laughed his demonic laugh he faded away into nothingness around his father and a voice echoed.."You failed...and when you awaken...you'll know you dont deserve to live", the voice said. Suddenly everything went back to normal and Tekkiri looked at his father. He smiled as his dad had a blank almost empty face on, suddenly the depression kicked in and he looked as if he were in a trance. Tekkiri stepped inside his room and closed the door, lying down in bed...When he awoke the next day he walked into his father's room to see that the man had hung himself...committing suicide.

Nicknames: Been called Isshi, Akegata etc...most preferred is Tori


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PostSubject: Re: Tekkiri Yuki   Sat Apr 02, 2011 10:44 pm

~Ninjutsu~
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~Bloodline Jutsu~
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~Genjutsu~
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~Fuuninjutsu~
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PostSubject: Re: Tekkiri Yuki   Thu Apr 07, 2011 12:46 am

Everything seems to be in order. Are you finished with this Kage app?
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PostSubject: Re: Tekkiri Yuki   Thu Apr 07, 2011 12:50 am

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PostSubject: Re: Tekkiri Yuki   Thu Apr 07, 2011 2:22 am

Your Character Information, Ninja ID, Clan Information, and Misc. Information are all approved.

As for Jutsus:

~ Ninjutsu ~

Quote :
Name: Gentoushin no Jutsu - Lit Apparition Technique
Rank: B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close-Mid
Description: Gentoushin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique created by Pain and used by Akatsuki to gather at one location, even while members are in different parts of the world. By forming the needed handseal, an astral form of their being will appear at the desired location. This spirit can act in conjunction with other members to do combination jutsu like the Genryuu Kyuu Fuujin. While in the spirit form, the member’s voice will sound deep and distorted.

You'll only apparate if you'd been in that location before or have extremely specific details and a completely accurate imagination and the position of the location.

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Name: Sense Removal
Rank: B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close
Description: The user cuts off a sense to the point whether they weaken it by a little or completely shut down the sense. When this is done the other senses are heightened to match how much of the sense was lost. The user can regain their sense back at any time they need to.

Please explain how.





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Name: Bushin Bakuha
Rank: A
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close
Description: A ninjutsu that self-destructs a shadow clone causing massive damage. Tekkiri has modified this jutsu to be compatable with the Inner Clone jutsu as well

According to my knowledge, we have never allowed this technique on the site for some reason.


~ Genjutsu ~

Quote :
Name: Inner Clone
Rank: S
Skill: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Far
Description: A unique genjutsu created by Tekkiri, thats powers in a sense are very similar to the Uchiha's Izanagi genjutsu. This genjutsu begins by Tekkiri making a clone but not of the user but of anything. Another person, the user or anything the user could think of. However this clone doesnt truely exist. Its a genjutsu casted by Tekkiri however to the opponent the clone seems real and because of that any pain the opponent feels because of this is real. Since the clone is a genjutsu it isnt effected by genjutsu and seems invincible to most other attacks. Since its a genjutsu the clone isnt binded by reality and can do most things, however because of that it might become obvious that its a clone. Because of this its like Izanagi as it can make itself real when needed and an illusion when needed. This jutsu is kaiable by A-rank techniques.

It's incredibly hard for genjutsu to replicate physical pain without actual contact (like suffocation or damage hits) from the caster. Therefore, instead of making it that the clone seems real to the target just specifically state the illusion target the entirety of the brain so that their mind identifies the clone as real so you can make the pain receptors identify that as the appropriate pain level. Also if it's similiar to Izanagi, then please make a genjutsu post count (how long the illusion is active) for no more than twelve posts.

~ Fuuinjutsu ~


Quote :
Name: Stone Tablet
Rank: A
Skill: Fuuninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Far
Description: A summoning jutsu of a Stone tablet that it 5 meters thick and 50 feet high. This jutsu is similar to a black hole and absorbs any ninjutsu technique from the user and his or her opponent. The tablet can only be destroyed in 3 ways, either by the will of the user, if the user dies or if its hit with a jutsu the rank of high A or S. When destroyed the rock will crumble leaving behind a black hole that will suck up anything and anyone (its possible to run away from since the suction is stronger put people can run from it) for a 50 meter radius for 5 post. If not destroyed the tablet lasts for 10 posts before crumbling and activating its secondary effects. There is another ability to this tablet. Any attack it absorbs is converted into raw chakra and if willed by Tekkiri the tablet will merely explosion in a powerful blast or chakra, devestating the surrounding area. Due to the chakra used to create the technique, it can explode at any type and still be powerful. Any addition techniques absorbed just furthers its strength.

Make it 3 posts. Remove the 10 post effect.

~ Bloodline Techniques ~

All of your Hyouton-based techniques are approved.

And here we go, your special, unique blood water-based techniques:


Quote :
Name: Chiame no Jutsu - (Blood Rain Technique)
Rank: B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Blood
Range: Close
Description: This jutsu doesn't require hand-seals, the only forewarning is that the clouds above turn red as the user sends chakra waves to the skies. This jutsu can be activated at anytime after its been stated that the clouds turned red. From that point It begins to rain blood the size of senbon that are adamant density usually tearing to shreads everything within a 50m radius of where the technique was activated. This technique affects the user as well.

Steel density sorry.


Quote :
Name: Chi Enkai : Blood Ocean
Rank: A
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Blood
Range: Close
Description: This jutsu is similar to Baku Suishouha except its on a far larger scale. Because of these affinity to blood a Saiken can produce a massive amount of blood with there chakra and then the user expels the Blood from their gullet covering the entire area in a ocean of blood. With this blood techniques on a large scale can be used. The blood is like water and requires the ability to walk on water to be able to walk on it.

Ehhh..... maybe on the size of a lake. Creating something on the size of an ocean (unless it's not to be taken literally) would be similiary near the scale of creating the moon. Doing so would be a S-class technique that would consume over 80 CP and/or most likely kill you or at least take several minutes to fill up. I'd say the quantity of this technique is equivalent to the Great Exploding Colliding Waves used by Kisame but all flattened out.


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Name: Chi Seisaku
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Blood
Range: Close
Description: This is a skill that all Saikens can train that allow their body to produce any amount of blood to replace the amount the body lost near instantly making sure the user doesnt have to much or little blood in their body at all times.

Just gonna set a rank range here of D-S.

D: Blood loss of a finger
C: Blood loss of a hand
B: Blood loss of a full limb (the entire arm or leg)
A: Blood loss of a vital area or major limb (major organs, major blood loss from the chest/torso)
S: Blood loss of half of the body

Anything over that will be non-recovarable.

Quote :
Name: Chi Bakuha
Rank: B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Blood
Range: Close
Description: This jutsu is similar to Bushin Bakuha. Its used to self-destruct the Chi Animaru or Bloody Maiden jutsu causing massive damage to the opponent. The explosion only gravely damages opponents within 25 meters of the object exploded. When this jutsu is used the blood that made the technique spreads into the air and automatically spreads the area in a 100meter wide Chikiri no Jutsu.

Remove.

Quote :
Name: Chi Summoning : Bloody Maiden
Rank: A
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Blood
Range: Close
Description: The user slams his hands down and a red fog appears around the area. The fog then soon disappears and a ghastly figure emerges with solidified crystalized blood for hair, bleeding from the eyes, nose and mouth, and ruby eyes. The Maiden then releases a wail that causes the opponents ears to bleed from the eyes, mouth and ears. After 4 turns this will causes the opponent to die from massive lost of blood if the Maiden isnt defeated. Tekkiri has built up some immunity to this technique, however he is also vunerable to its effects for the most part. Since the Maiden is made of blood is has the ability to be transformed into any Saiken technique as well as reform. The Maiden is unaffected by any genjutsu. She can be destroyed if attacked by three B-rank or higher jutsu and injuried, or if she suffers damage from a direct A-rank technique (like Chidori or Rasengan).
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4 turns meaning eight posts? If so, then heighten it to twelve posts or 6 turns. Also the CP for this will be 18 or higher.

Quote :
Name: Chi Summoning : Bloody Maiden
Rank: S
Skill: Genjutsu
Element: Blood
Range: Close
Description: A genjutsu whoses strenght matches Emphermal in strength. One the 1st turn the user slams his hand down to the ground, seemingly summoning mirrors that begin to cover the field for 50 meters. Each mirrior begins to shine and then the opponent would see their reflection in the mirrior. On the second turn from each mirrior a ghastly figure emerges with solidified crystalized blood for hair, bleeding from the eyes, nose and mouth, and ruby eyes. This figure then attacks the user killing him and tearing his body into bloody shreads and taking the remaining pieces back into the mirrior. If the jutsu isnt not stopped and the opponent dies inside the genjutsu then they die in reality. When this is done the outside body is now an empty shell for the soul and mind were destroyed and claimed by the Maiden. This technique can be strengthened if used with the Hyouton Mirror technique.

How long is it when you mean if the jutsu isn't stopped? Also, unfortunately, actual major mental damage is Mangekyou Sharingan-exclusive or that's how I'm modding it. So you can make it a Ninjutsu/Genjutsu technique.

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PostSubject: Re: Tekkiri Yuki   Thu Apr 07, 2011 2:52 am

Understood and everything that needed to be corrected was. As for the ocean technique, its just a name...does the same as Kisame's technique which is a Lake.
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PostSubject: Re: Tekkiri Yuki   Thu Apr 07, 2011 7:58 pm

Alrighty then. Approved
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PostSubject: Re: Tekkiri Yuki   Mon May 30, 2011 12:24 pm

1. Gentoushin no Jutsu - Lit Apparition Technique. Please get rid of.

2. Secondly, your character is of the Yuki clan, "Ice manipulation" so before I proceed any further. Please get rid of all these sound based Jutsus that you have in your App.

3. Everything blood related needs to go as well please.

4. Once all of this is done, I will look at the rest of your App. As of now, this App, well Jutsu wise is on hold.

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