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PostSubject: Josho-fu ha   Mon May 30, 2011 5:42 am


Name: Josho-fu ha
Owner: Horoku

Attribute/Element: Fuuton
Special Ability: The sword has the ability to 'cut through the air' when Horoku swings them. With this, if there was a wind storm or sand storm, the speed at which Horoku swings them wouldn't be affected at all.
Special Attack:
One special ability that the sword has is the ability to send out air currents with a single swing.

Name: Tatsumaki no Jutsu
Rank: B
Skill: Kenjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Range: Close(0m-5m) Mid(5m-10m)
Description: Tatsumaki no Jutsu is a technique utilized by Horoku using one or both of his swords. While spinning the swords in his hand, the blades will generate into a funnel in Horoku's hand. When the funnel is completely made, Horoku will hurl the tornado at the opponent. The tornado is strong enough to chip iron.
Drawback: Excessive use of the special attacks during one battle will cause the swords to start chipping. Soon enough the blade will become dull and won't be able to be used. After 6 post is when it starts. Every post after that a special attack is used will just add on to the process. Josho-fu ha has to constantly be sharpened for the sword to have it's full affects.
Durability: The swords can be melted, but it will take a strong A-ranked Katon attack.

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Alloy/Substance: Steel
Length & Width: 37 inches long, 3 inches wide

Background:
Upon his victory in the Chuunin Exams, his dad began to take a little more notice into him. He told his colleagues about it and said, " He's not that big of a failure anymore." One of his teammates then asked Horoku to come with him on a mission. While on the mission, he stole of of Horoku's chakra when he was asleep. They finally made it to their destination, which was the Land of Iron. There, they met up with a blacksmith. Hearing about his past battle with the dual sword user, the Black Op decided to get him two swords. While the blacksmith made it, the Black Op used a sealing technique to embed Horoku's chakra in each sword, so they would have his Fuuton ability.
Creator: Land of Iron blacksmith/ANBU Black Op


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PostSubject: Re: Josho-fu ha   Mon May 30, 2011 11:52 am

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Special Ability: Since the swords utilize Horoku's Fuuton chakra, Josho-fu ha can easily cut through the air. This makes them seem as if Horoku can wield with ease. This also increases the speed at which the blades move. The swords also have a DNA sample of Horoku. When not in his hands, the swords will fly through the air right into his hands.

Special Attack:
As well as being able to send out air currents which can cut slice up to iron and break tree barks, Josho-fu ha was one special attack.

1. How does being a wind type increases the speed at which the blades move? Does it not require you to actually swing the swords themselves? This just doesn't add up.

2. The sword having your DNA makes it seem impossible for you to lose that blade. And even so, you don't seem to sacrifice anything for such abilities.

3. Your special attack and technique needs toning down. Plus keep in mind that attacks will require chakra, substantial to the level of the Jutsu being used.

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PostSubject: Re: Josho-fu ha   Mon May 30, 2011 1:46 pm

Okay, edited. Anymore suggestions?
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PostSubject: Re: Josho-fu ha   Mon May 30, 2011 3:13 pm

Wait, 12 post is too long of a time. It needs to be shortened to say, 6 or 7 posts.
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PostSubject: Re: Josho-fu ha   Mon May 30, 2011 3:59 pm

Okay, that better?
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PostSubject: Re: Josho-fu ha   Mon May 30, 2011 6:32 pm

looks good to me thus far... if you want it it will be 15 SC for the swords
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PostSubject: Re: Josho-fu ha   Mon May 30, 2011 7:14 pm

Okay. I accept.
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PostSubject: Re: Josho-fu ha   Tue May 31, 2011 3:41 am

ok then approved can an admin please remove the SC
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