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PostSubject: Horoku....   Mon May 30, 2011 12:08 am


Character Information

Name: Horoku

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Place of Birth: Kirigakure

Date of Birth: May 21

Appearance:
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Height: 5' 7"

Weight: 147 pounds

Personality:
Upon becoming a Chuunin, Horoku changed at how he used to act. While at first his goal was trying to impress his father, he became all about himself and his goals. Horoku likes to keep his hood over his head, as a sense of isolating himself from the rest of the world. Most people say that the look on his face is a vacant, depressing look. Many people also think of him as a loner. Horoku won't really associate with many people. If he developes a good enough bond with you, he'll begin to speak out more. Other than that, Horoku usually remains quiet. Though quiet, Horoku's mind is always 'talking' as he is always in deep thought and observing things.

Horoku likes to look at the things around him and just observe his surroundings. His mind is always working. Whether he's thinking about the people around him, or what he's going to train for next, he always has to thing about something. With this reason, Horoku is usually able to point out even the smallest of details. While training in his Genin years, Horoku was able to stop using his eyes and use his mind and other senses more.

Even when in battle, Horoku is always observing things. He is able to adapt quickly to the change of a battle, such as change of battlefield or increased opponents. He'll act like he can't battle at first, but what he's really doing is observing his opponent's battling styles. He'll then try to come up with a strategy that will work against his opponent.

Likes: .

  • Winning
  • People impressed with him
  • Looking good
  • Exceeding expectations
  • Being the best
  • Kenjutsu

    Dislikes:
  • People getting in his way
  • Looking bad
  • Failing
  • Many other things


History:

Birth Arc

From the time he was born, Horoku's father began to put an enormous amount pressure on him. His father himself was an ANBU Captain and Horoku's brother was a well known swordsmen; he wanted Horoku to be just as successful as the rest of the family. From the time he could walk, his father began training him in the arts of Taijutsu. By the time he said his first words, he was able to wield and throw a Kunai. Thinking he was going to be even greater than his older brother, his father enrolled him in the Academy early at the age of five.

Horoku could not handle the expectations everyone put on him; so when the time of the exams came, he failed miserably. For years after this, his dad would not talk to him. He wouldn't even acknowledge him. Horoku was determined to regain his father's approval of him. By himself, he worked nearly day and night improving his strength and speed as well as improving his weaponry skills. He was determined to never fail again.

Academy Arc

At the age of twelve, Horoku decided to attempt to go through Ninja Academy once again. Some of the new teachers were in Horoku's class when he was younger and ridiculed him for quitting. They believed he didn't have what it takes to be a real shinobi and would never live up to his family's name. Though he was shunned by these few people, Horoku was praised by all the other students just for the fact that he was able to go through the academy at such a young age. They thought he was the most talented one there.

Throughout the year, he was able to complete every task without an issue. When graduation came, he past with flying colors. When he got his forhead protector and showed it to his father, his father began acknowledging him once again. They still never had the relationship they had once before. His father was still ashamed. Due to this, Horoku denied his surname so that he would never be expected to perform as good as his father and brother. Upon graduating, he also started teaching himself Kenjutsu. After seeing one of the members of the Seven Swordsmen spar, he vowed that he would become a member one day and be the very best. That, he thought, would get his dad to be impressed with him once again.

Genin Arc
After hearing his dad's words after telling him the news, he vowed that he would change his dad's mind about him. Horoku was just a little kid who wanted his dad back; he wanted them to have the relationship they had when he was younger. All the training he did was for him, to impress him. Horoku also isolated himself from everyone, even his comrades on his squad. He didn't want any distractions from anybody. Inside, he also had the same forte as his dad. Anyone who didn't live up to his expectations wasn't worth it at all. Horoku didn't want to have to go through that disappointment.

Horoku began extreme training. From developing different techniques to increasing his Kenjutsu skills, Horoku was always training. When around other people, Horoku secluded himself in his mind. With this art of always thinking, Horoku developed the skills of pointing out the smallest detail and he learned how to use his other sense more instead of just his eyes. Soon, all his training led up one big day: Chuunin Exams.

During the exams, Horoku dominated. He past every part easily and was pretty much the highlight of the event. All the protectors and Kages who were watching took great notice of him. When it came down to the battling, Horoku seemed to defeat the other Genin without struggle. During every battle, he looked out in the crowd to see if his dad was there, but never saw him. Depression fell over him everytime he battled, but he always hid his pain. When he felt tears flowing, he pulled his hood down further to cover his eyes. His hood became his symbolism for hiding his feelings and isolating himself from the world. During the finals was when Horoku actually struggled. He decided to try out his Kenjutsu skills for the final battle. His opponent, though, showed a greater skill than he did by utilizing two blades. This provided a great challenge for Horoku. At one point, he nearly was decapitated. Using the opponent's pride and cockiness against him, though, Horoku was able to defeat him and became a Chuunin. Not seeing his dad at the exams or when they had the ceremony for him changed Horoku. He soon stopped worrying about impressing him or anyone and looked towards his goal to becoming the best swordsmen and a member of the Seven Swordsmen of Kirigakure.


Ninja ID

Village: Kirigakure

Rank: Chuunin

Element: Fuuton

Nindo: " To get to where I want to be I will slice any obstacle and, if I have to, anybody out my way! So stay at a distance..."

Skills: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu

Equipment:
Kunai Knives
Shuriken
Exploding Pouch
File
Josho-fu ha[Rising Wind Blades]

Fighting Styles:

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RP sample:
" I present this forehead protector to Seiko Horoku. You are now a Kirigakure Genin," As the Mizukage wrapped the headband around his head, Horoku could only think about his father. He would be proud that he finally graduated. His first attempted at the age of five didn't go so well, and it put an almost unpatchable whole in their relationship. Horoku's father was determined for him to become the youngest ever Genin, but he failed him. Now, though, he made it out and was going to become the best shinobi in all of Kirigakure.

When the ceremony was over the first thing Horoku did was run home; his forehead protector gleamed in the sun. As he got to the front door, his dad was walking out to go the ANBU headquarters. He had his uniform on, so he could have been getting ready for a mission. " Dad, look! I did it!!! I graduated from the Academy!!! I had the best score in the class, nearly perfect!!!" He was breathing heavily from saying that whole sentence in one breath and from running from the Academy to his house. A wide smile was on his face. He waited patiently for a reply from his father. His father just stared vacantly at him for awhile and finally said, " That's good son, but a lot of other kids around the world graduated as well." He then left to head off to the headquarters. The smile on Horoku's face disappeared.

Those were the first words his father had spoken to him in the last eight years, but he still obviously has forgiven Horoku for 'embarrassing' him for failing the previous time at the academy. It didn't matter how young he was at that time, a failure was a failure to his dad. Horoku put his head down and walked glumly into the house. He plopped down on his bed and just let the tears flow from his eyes. The same tears he's been crying for eight years trying to get his dad to acknowledge him. Wiping the tears from his eyes, he took the forehead protector off his head and stared at it. He clinched it hard in his fist and thought, I'll make him acknowledge me again one day! One day, he'll be impressed with me! One day. He then went outside to train for that one day.
Nicknames: Horo, Jay


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PostSubject: Re: Horoku....   Mon May 30, 2011 3:22 am

Jutsu:
Name: Bushin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Element: -
Skill: Ninjutsu
Range: -
Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).

Name: Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E
Element: -
Skill: Ninjutsu
Range: -
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konohagakure Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation technique is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: E
Element: -
Skill: Ninjutsu
Range: -
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Exploding tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Name: Dynamic Entry
Rank: D
Element:-
Range: Close(0m-5m)
Amount of Stress: Minor
Skill: Taijutsu
Description: Dynamic Entry is a Taijutsu technique used by Might Guy. Guy will throw a kunai to distract his targets attention, he will then use his speed and agility to quickly approach and attack his opponent from their blind side.

Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: -
Description: Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target.

Name: ShiShi Rendan
Rank: C
Element: -
Range: Close(0m-5m)
Amount of Stress: Minor
Skill: Taijutsu
Description: ShiShi Rendan is a Taijutsu technique developed by Uchiha Sasuke after he used his Sharingan to copy the movements of fellow Leaf ninja Rock Lee. Sasuke first uses the Konoha Kage Buyou to manuever his opponent in a vulnerable aerial position. While shadowing his opponent, Sasuke will attempt to strike them from a vulnerable angle. If he is unable to make a clean strike, he will strike anyway as a feint, to draw his target's attention and defense to one area. He can then strike the undefended area and begin knocking them downwards towards the ground. As the enemy falls back to the earth, Sasuke will deftly rotate his body around to deliver a full force kick to their chest.

Name: Fuuton • Daitoppa
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Range: Close(0m-5m) Mid(5m-10m)
Description: Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing his hand to his mouth, Orochimaru will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.

Name: Fuuton • Reppushou
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Range: Close(0m-5m) Mid(5m-10m)
Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Nagato will send a strong gust of wind towards his target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness.

Name: Fuuton • Shinkuuha
Rank: B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Range: Close(0m-5m) Mid(5m-10m)
Description: Fuuton • Shinkuuha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Danzou will inhale air and then rotate his body while expelling arcs of cutting wind. These arcs will be capable of cutting through an airborne opponent.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Range: -
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Name: kadzuki no Mai
Rank: A
Skill: Kenjutsu
Element: -
Range: Close(0m-5m)
Description: kadzuki no Mai is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used by the Leaf ninja Gekkou Hayate. As the ninja charges at his opponent, he creates mutiple shadow copies to confuse his opponent. Using the confusion, the real ninja will attack from the opponent's blindside.

Name: Hayabusa Otoshi
Rank: C
Element: -
Range: Close(0m-5m)
Amount of Stress: Minor
Skill: Taijutsu
Description: Hayabusa Otoshi is a Taijutsu technique used by Uchiha Sasuke. While at an elevated position, Sasuke will grab his opponent from behind. Firmly locking himself to their back, he will lock his ankles to their neck to get their body rigid. He will then plant them head first into the ground. Essentially a belly to back piledriver, the move can provide a great concussion to his opponent's head.


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PostSubject: Re: Horoku....   Mon May 30, 2011 5:43 am

Now I am finished.
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PostSubject: Re: Horoku....   Mon May 30, 2011 11:45 am

1. Please remove that ability of heightened hearing from your character's personality.

2.
Quote :
Name: Dai Kamaitachi
Rank: B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Range: Close(0m-5m) Mid(5m-10m) Far(10m+)
Description: Dai Kamaitachi is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Sand ninja Temari. Named after a mythical creature, Temari uses her fan to blow a concussive wind that is imbued with her chakra. This technique is a bigger version of the normal Kamaitachi no Jutsu, having the ability to cause a great amount of cutting damage to the nearby area.
This Jutsu needs to go.


3.
Quote :
Name: Fuuton • Shinkuuha
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Range: Close(0m-5m) Mid(5m-10m)
Description: Fuuton • Shinkuuha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Danzou will inhale air and then rotate his body while expelling arcs of cutting wind. These arcs will be capable of cutting through an airborne opponent.
Please increase the rank of this Jutsu to B-rank at least.

Make these edits and you might just earn yourself a stamp.

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PostSubject: Re: Horoku....   Mon May 30, 2011 1:49 pm

I believe thats everything.
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PostSubject: Re: Horoku....   Mon May 30, 2011 3:08 pm

Approved then
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