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PostSubject: Sumaru Shokubutsu   Mon May 16, 2011 4:10 pm

(OCC: to keep the story line evolving this character see's an aliance between the grass shinobi and the samurai in their neighbouring Land of Iron.)

Character Information
Name:
Sumaru Shokubutsu


Age:
23

Gender:
Male

Place of Birth:
Hidden Grass

Date of Birth:
February 1st

Appearance:



Sumaru is quite slender and tall, he is well toned and muscular. He inherited the blonde hair colour of his clan along with their yellow eyes. He wears the hat most grass shinobi have. On his upper half he wears a plain white t-shirt and a green jacket, he also keeps a sword attached to his back along with a blow pipe
On his lower half he wears ¾ length jeans, attached to this waist is two daggers and on his upper thy there is a holster to keep his ninja tools. He always walks bare footed.

Height:
6 foot

Weight:
11 stone

Personality:
Sumaru dosnt particularly trust any of the neighbouring nations due to them sharing a border with a couple of them and them using his home land for battle. Due to this he often comes across as quite cold and hard. Although he is realy a big softie underneath it all.
Rarly showing his true self he appears to be mysterious to others apart from the members of the his own village.


- Nature
- Creatures
- Sake
- Painting


Dislikes:
• War
• Destruction
• Inconsiderate people


History:
Birth Arc
Sumaru being born to to the hidden grass village was brought up to respect all the nature around him. As he grew up in the hidden grass he learned that using the forces of nature was the most effective method to utalise in all aspects of life.


Academy Arc
Durring his times in the academy the classes were full of fear and confusion as when the larger nations were to battle against each other they would often use his villages surrounding lush forest style land or the hidden rain villages wet style landscape. However during his times at the academy there was a great shinobi battle in the land that the hidden grass was located. this ment that having classes was a nuisance during this time. So most of the academy students were home schooled by their shinobi parents to ensure their safety. Sumaru was always quite the little book worm keeping this habbit throughout his life

Genin Arc:
After graduating from the academy being mostly home schooled he was trained by his older brother, as he was the jounin he was assigned to. During his training he was able to master his families jutsu. As this although after a while he was assigned to a different jounin as his older brother left the village as he was hired by the sand village due to his skills in growing and utalising many forms of plant life and maintaining insects, using them for medicinal purposes.
As the chuunin exams came his first time properly leaving the land of grass ment that a whole new world opened up to him. That year the exams were held in the leaf village not far from his home land ment that he would be in similar terrain that he was accustomed to. Undergoing the survival test was a simple matter for the young shinobi. During the battle round he was able to maintain his resolve and battle his way to victory. Although his opponent proved to be troublesome as they were very skilled meaning Sumaru had to think on his feet narrowly avoiding defeat.

Chuunin Arc:
Once he graduated from the exams he returned to his village. Each day he would hope that the other nations would not fued and leave his land in peace. But at this time a new threat came to be. Originating in the land of Iron, samurai made their move on the grass village. Each of the shinobi within the small village at this time was called upon to stop the advancing attack of the samurai.
Continuing to defend from these attacks for several years Sumaru managed to find time to train and enhance his skills further.

Jounin Arc:
Shortly after he was made a jounin by the village superiors the heads of the village were killed by a surprise samurai attack. This happened by the samurai posing as shinobi and posing as members of the village for some time. When they were aware of where the heads of the village were located they proceeded to assassinate the majority of them. Fortunately a handful of the village heads avoided this. And the offending samurai were delt with appropriately
For a short time after the village shinobi continued to fend off the samurai attacks.
However one fateful day a group of samurai along with their leader advanced on the village, causing all the village to go on defence. But the samurai simply walked to the gates and requested to speek with the village elders. Reluctantly it was agreed to and on this day a peace treaty was signed between the hidden geass and the samurai of the land of iron.
From this day the samurai agreed to teach the grass shinobi the way of the sword adding to the villages level of combat skill. Naturaly a young Sumaru took full advantage of this offer learning the new skill

Kage Arc:
(As the hidden grass dosnt have a Kage ill call him Head Shinobi)
After the peace treaty was signed by the village heads and the samurai the heads of the village decided that it was time to have a shinobi in the village who could be seen as the Kage but without the title.
Sumaru being called before the heads of the willage was informed that he was one of the few shinobi within the hidden grass that could be considered on the same level as the Kage of the five great nations. Although he was one of the few he was chosen due to his skills both on the battlefield and his nature abilities.
Taking on this position he vowed to take on the responsibility of the head shinobi of the village as well as carry out the usual duties of a jounin level shinobi. This means that he still carries out missions assigned as well as training several other genin level shinobi. Although he hasn’t been assigned any trainees for a while now. He is often called on by the hidden sand village as an alliance was formed with them shortly after Sumaru was chosen as the head shinobi of the hidden grass.


Ninja ID

Village:
Hidden Grass

Rank:
Head Shinobi

Element:
Earth, Water

Nindo:
No more war

Skills:
Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Weaponry kenjutsu

Equipment:
X2 Daggers
Standard samurai sword (40” long)
Blow Pipe
Shuriken
Kunai
Paper Bombs
Smoke Bombs

Fighting Styles:
he prefers mid to long range combat. However when he gets into close combat he will prefere to use weapons such as his daggers

Jutsu:

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Range: Self
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Bushin No Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Range: Self
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: -
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Range: Self
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Skill:Ninjutsu
Element: -
Range: Self
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Water Bullet
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: Mid - Long
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to fire shots of water from their mouth. The shots of water are rather small but can be fired many times one after the other. These shots of water have a considerable force behind them.

Name: Water Clone
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: N/A
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to create single or multiple clones from water. These clones arnt much use for attacking purposs but prove effective for a diversion or recon

Name: Earth bullets
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: Mid - Long
Description:
This jutsu works in the same manner as the water bullet, however the user will essentially eat a peice of earth to enable them to perform this jutsu.

Name: Water Wall
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: Close
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to create a wall of water from an available water source or the atmosphere to create a wall of water to be used for defensive purposes

Name: Mud Wall
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: Close
Description:
This jutsu works in the same manner as the water wall jutsu. However any form of earth or rock can be used for this. At this rank it is able to cover the user only
At higher rank - This jutsu enables the user to create a 10m x 10m wall covering many alies this is a B- ranked jutsu

Name: Water Senbon
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: Close - long
Description:
This jutsu enables the user to form water, either from the atmosphere or a water source, into senbon needles. This then means once they are created they can be fired at the opponent in the same manner as senbon needles.

Name: Rock Barrage
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: Close - long
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to pull earth and rock from the ground to hover around them. The peices of earth are then fired at an opponent at high speeds, like bullets. for this level there are 4 of these rocks created
C-ranked, there is 8 created
B-ranked, there is 12 created
A-ranked there is 18 created

Name: Water Prison
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: Close
Description:
The user forms a sphere of water around the opponent trapping them so they are unable to move. The problem is the user will have to keep a hand on the sphere to maintain the jutsu. This trapping technique can be used to drown the opponent if it is not released

If this technique is used to trap opponents even multiple opponents at a distance it will be more difficult and make it an A ranked jutsu

Name: Earth Prison
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: Close
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to trap up to five opponents in a dome shaped mound of earth, by causing the earth to come up around the opponent(s) trapping them. However they may then be able to escape underground

Name: Dig
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: Self
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to manoeuvre underground without disturbing the ground. This then also allows the user to attack opponents from bellow or make a swift escape if in trouble.

Name: Water strike
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Water
Range: Close
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to form water around their fists and feet. Making the water sharp while attacking this ensbles them to strike heavily with taijutsu while slashing their opponent

Name: Cushion
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: Close - Long
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to make the earth soft in any direction he chooses, the user places their hands on the cround and makes the ground soft in a direction, the marks made are seen to be about 1m wide and where it stops a 3m radius of soft ground if formed. This is a paticuarly useful jutsu when a comerade is falling. Has a maximum range of 20 metres in a single direction

Name: Earth Toss
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: Close - Mid
Description:
This jutsu enables the user to grab onto earth or rock pulling a peice (approx 5m x 5m) from the ground to either strike the opponent with it by swinging, or throwing it at the opponent to deal considerable damage

Name: Ninja-Samurai
Rank: B
Type: Kekkei genkai/kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close
Description:
The user using his kekkei genkai to form blades of plants around his daggers. The blades he forms are as tough, sharp and durable as any samurai sword. By doing this he is able to use the daggers as normal Katana’s, allowin the user to use sword mastery learned from the samurai.


Name: Meteor
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: Mid - Long
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to take earth and rock and condence it until the peices resembles a meteorite. Several of these can be created at the same time, this then allows the user to bombard the opponent with these basket ball sized meteors

Name: Water jet
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: Mid - Long
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to produce a concentrated jet of water from their mouth. This jutsu produces a jet of water powerful enough to cut through steel.

Name: Typhoon
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: N/A
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to create a great typhoon ow water, this spinning vortex will do considerable damage to whatever gets in its way. This jutsu is difficult to control and can go off in any direction

Name: Earthquake
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: N/A
Description:
This jutsu causes an earth quake in the immediate area and causes the ground to split and crack changing the terrain completly.

Name: Water Vortex
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: Close - Long
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to create a spinning vortex of water. This powerful attack sends the vortex of water directly at an opponent knocking them off their feet and sending them a great distance ‘slaming’ into what ever happens to be in the way. This jutsu has been known to move boulders and snap trees like there twigs.

Name: Golum
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: Close - Mid
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to call upon a humanoid figure made entirely of earth and rock. This jutsu is powerful as the golum is powerful enough to crush an opponent in a single strike. Normaly this figure will jump on the opponent crushing them then collapsing back into a pile of earth.

Name: Water Fall
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: N/A
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to create a reversed waterfall to surround the opponent hitting them with tremendous force. The force of the water fall will then send them high into the sky causing them to land with great force

Name: Spikes
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: Radius
Description: This jutsu causes the earth in the surrounding area to ‘shoot’ out of the ground to form sharp pointed stalactites. The range for this jutsu is a 30m radius around the user. If there are alies within the radius then this may be dangerous for them.

Name: Water Dragon
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: Close - Long
Description:
This attack makes water from a nearby source to take the form of a dragon approx 15foot tall to bite and slash at the opponent to the users will. Although this jutsu will normally be used to attack the opponent head on to deal considerable damage to them.

Name: Water burial
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: N/A
Description:
If the opponent is consealing themselves within a body of water the user can cause the water to harden and trap them. The user can then either wait for the opponent to drown or use the hardened water to crush them

Name: Earth burial
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: N/A
Description:
This jutsu works in the same manner as the water burial jutsu, however an opponent can be located anywhere within a large area and engulfed in the same manner as the sand coffin. After the opponent is trapped the user can used the trapping for interrogation purposes literally squeezing the information out of them. Or the user can choose to crush the opponent and dispose of the body by sending the victim deep underground.

Name: Great Lake
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: N/A
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to create a body of water, resembling a lake, in the area. This may be done if they wish to make water jutsu easier to use or to make it easier for water type alies. The jutsu is also useful for the user to create a moat around the likes of a village to add to it’s protection

Name: Terra Form
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: N/A
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to control the surrounding area and manipulate it to their will. This may involve making a great gorge separating the ground or even raise a village from its current level. These changes will be perminant after the jutsu is used, although can be returned to normal by using the jutsu once again.


Clan Information

Clan:
Shokubutsu

Kekkei Genkai:
Nature Release

Description:
Working in a similar manner to the wood release, however the clan is unable to control and create wood thay can only controll plants such as: flowers, weeds, vines, shrubs, etc

This technique gives the unique ability of controlling the natural environment. This means that they will be able to control plant life.
The plant life is controlled by causing plants to grow at a rapid rate enabling those with the kekkei genkai to either attack or defend with any form of plant. This can be used for offence and defence purposes. It also enables tham to to control the likes of leaves causing them to harden and become sharp to be used as individual weapons. Like shuriken.
Creatures such as small mammals can be communicated with through their kekkei genkai, this is very handy for recon purposes.


Clan weapon:
Whatever is handy

Clan History:
This clan origionated in the hidden grass village and remain there loyal to the village. Often other villages will call upon them due to their unique abilities with plants. Often they are requested to produce medicinal herbs in other villages throughout the nations.
The clan are the maintainers of the village and take it upon themselves to ensure that the village is well protected with plant life as well as ensuring that they keep the villages medicinal supply well stocked up.

Clan Jutsu:

Name: Rapid growth
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Description:
This simple jutsu allows the user to accelerate the growth of plants by a rapid amount. This jutsu can cause any plant to go from seed to fully grown in the blink of the eye

Name: leaf shuriken
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid - Long
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to sharpen and harden leaves or flowers allowing them to be used like shuriken. Either thrown or directed straight from the plant it origionates from

Name: Nature Manipulation
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close - Mid
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to manipulate any plant to move as the user pleases

Name: Camouflage
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to hide themselves in any form of plantation and become almost undetectable (except to ninkin) also this will allow them to move freely within the plant life

Name: Natural Order
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close - Long
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to rapidly grow plants and attack an opponent with them. As the plants attack parts are hardened and sharpened to slash at the opponent or impale them.

Name: Seed Bullet
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid-Long
Description:
This jutsu enables the user to use their blow pipe to fire seeds directly at an opponent. This can be used for tracking purposes or they can put enough force into it so the seed can penetrate the shin and then be rapidly grown inside them

Name: Barrier
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to rapidly grow a series of plants to form a tight protective barrier to protect them from oncoming attacks

Name: Seed Clone
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to create a perfect clone of themselves grown directly from a seed. This clone can be communicated with over great distances. Once the jutsu is released the clone will either return to a seed form, if back to original or turn into a plant left to innocently grow where the jutsu is released

Name: Seed barrage
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close - Long
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to float seeds in the air and fire them at the opponent like tiny bullets. The aim of this isn’t to damage the opponent but to have the seeds enter their body so they can use the rapid grow jutsu destroying an opponent from the inside.


Name: Striking Growth
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid
Description:
This jutsu works in the same manner as ‘striking shadow snakes’ however it uses the seeds stored under the users sleeves allowing them to strike and bind an opponent. Once an opponent has been bound they can be squeezed and basically crushed by this jutsu

Name: Plant dome
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to create a thick dome of plant life around themselves. This proves a very effective barrier against enemy attacks, also it can be used as a shelter while travelling on missions. The dome can be made large enough to contain up to 6 people

Name: Planted Prison
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Description:
This jutsu causes plants to grow rapidly around the opponent binding and trapping them. This is more a trapping technique rather than an offence technique

Name: Barbed Whip
Rank: C
Type: weaponry
Range: Close - Mid
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to create a whip from any form of plant. They prefere thorny plants for this as the hardening of the thorns will allow them to cause more damage while using the whips.

Name: Toxic Trap
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Description:
By using seeds this jutsu allows the user to grow poisonous plants on the opponent. As the plant grows on the users body thorns will scrape and penetrate the opponents skin. As this happens the toxins and poisons are injected into the opponent. First this will make them ill and eventually kill them if untreated. The clan members always carry a good supply of the antidote for these plants.

Name: Slash Dance
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to grow several plands down their arms and legs. This loose form of taijutsu allows the user to slash and kick quickly with the addition of hardened sharp plants on their arms and legs

Name: Petal Dance
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu
Range: Close
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to command leaves and petals while attacking an opponent with taijutsu. As they move their arms and legs attacking with taijutsu hardened sharpened leaves and petals follow the movements to add additional slashing to the opponent

Name: Bash
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to form club like formations of plants around their feet and fists. This jutsu then allows them to use taijutsu to attack with force rivalled only by a wrecking ball

Name: Bridge
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Description:
This jutsu enables the user to rapidly grow plants to form a firm sturdy crossing over gorges, broken bridges, etc. The crossing is strong enough to support well over a ton in weight.

Name: Plant Storm
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to use the plants in the immediate area or grow their own to cause them to be fired at the opponent. All the plants are hardened and sharpened while this is happening to have the most effect on the opponents.

Name: Forest Seal
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close - Mid
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to create four walls of rapidly grown plants around the opponent sealing them in with a roof. After this phase is complete the user will attack the opponent inside with all the plants available, impaling them from all directions while they are within the walls. Once this jutsu is complete the opponent well be unrecognisable

Name: Forest
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Radius
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to rapidly grow as many plants as they like in an area. Enabling both themselves and members of their home village to fight an opponent more effectively
This Jutsu will allow the user to create what resembles a tropical rainforest in a radius of approximately 1.5 mile

Name: Forest Dragon
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to greate a dragon from either existing plant life or rapidly grown plant life. through the users kekkei genkai they can control the dragon as they please. Using it to fire cannonballs of plants, vines to bind the opponent or simply attack. As this is controlled with great ease through the kekkei genkai the user will be able to use other jutsu’s as they please
If required the user will be able to make the dragon fly using it as a form of transport

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PostSubject: Re: Sumaru Shokubutsu   Mon May 16, 2011 9:34 pm

i dont know if they would have a Kage or not because they arnt one of the main countries. But i suppose the lesser countries would have some type of powerful leader... i guess head shinobi would work but not sure what power level that would be.
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PostSubject: Re: Sumaru Shokubutsu   Mon May 16, 2011 9:41 pm

i thought id put him roughly on the same power level as a kage but with less S-rank jutsu

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PostSubject: Re: Sumaru Shokubutsu   Mon May 16, 2011 9:53 pm

hmmm you have seven s rank now would it be resonable to make that five? or is that already cut back >.<
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PostSubject: Re: Sumaru Shokubutsu   Mon May 16, 2011 10:00 pm

would 6 be ok
or if need be i could do 5 Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Sumaru Shokubutsu   Mon May 16, 2011 10:13 pm

approved <.< >.> :ferret:
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PostSubject: Re: Sumaru Shokubutsu   Sun May 29, 2011 12:04 pm

You may only start with two S-ranks. And at the moment, you have two, too many. So cut it down to 2 S-Ranks please.

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PostSubject: Re: Sumaru Shokubutsu   Sun May 29, 2011 6:21 pm

no problem Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Sumaru Shokubutsu   Sun May 29, 2011 8:33 pm

oops oh is anyone having trouble with spoilers i cant read them...
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PostSubject: Re: Sumaru Shokubutsu   Sun May 29, 2011 8:48 pm

there ya go i changed the spoiler text to white

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PostSubject: Re: Sumaru Shokubutsu   Mon May 30, 2011 12:09 pm

1. Water Bullet is currently a D-rank technique, increase it to C-rank at least.

2. Water clone, Earth Bullets, Water wall jutsu all needs bumping up to C-rank at least.

3. Increase the Rank on the Mud Wall Jutsu please.

4. Water Senbon Needs bumping up to B-rank since it requires a great amount of skill for such a technique to work.

5. Rock Barrage Please state how many pieces of rank is pulled out at once. And depending on the amount, increase the rank to B/A.

6. Dig and Water Strike Jutsus..please increase their rank.

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Name: Cushion
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: Close - Long
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to make the earth soft in any direction he chooses, the user places their hands on the cround and makes the ground soft in a direction, the marks made are seen to be about 1m wide and where it stops a 3m radius of soft ground if formed. This is a paticuarly useful jutsu when a comerade is falling


Is this 1 mile wide or 1 meter? if its one mile wide, I suggest you tone this down drastically.

8. You seem to have gone way over the 25 or so Jutsus allowed when creating your character. That and you seem to have a Kekkei Genkai that lets you control plant life and trees. Now as you may know, that is more like a Senju clan ability. And I see no relations between you and them, nor have you posted your clan in the correct section. As of now, your Jutsus are on hold, until we can get this stuff sorted.

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PostSubject: Re: Sumaru Shokubutsu   Mon May 30, 2011 6:03 pm

to me it looks like the ground affected is in meters but can be used at a distance...
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PostSubject: Re: Sumaru Shokubutsu   Tue May 31, 2011 12:56 am

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And trees/wood confused
Oh no i mean just plants (placed above to avoid confusion) nope i havent gave him the wood ability

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